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ogkathyc
10-07-2008, 02:00 AM
Please tell me what you think ?

I'm applying to fidm for graphic design. Here's the entrance project thing.


It's like a gothic-ish dressy store. for teens and stuff

Made up the name and the slogan

NAME:Sydney's Fantasy
SLOGAN: Where dreams and nightmares collide

this picture is the design of the Shopping bag.

PLEASE be honest

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/ka... (http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/kathee310/showitoff.jpg)

oh. the cube at the top isnt part of the design, its supposed to be the holding part of the bag. (Its supposed to be a white bag)
Muffy_Stopheles
10-07-2008, 11:15 AM
I think it's cute. :) I love the text..
senacia
10-07-2008, 06:22 PM
i LOVE the daisies and the little swirly trail of dots..

i think you need something "nightmarish" in there though as that is in the name and there is no image for that aspect.. although I guess the blood splatter thing by the y of fantasy is kinda nightmarish..

over all though, i really like it!

oh, also, I think "Sydney's" is suppose to be "Sydneys' " with the apostrophe at the end of the name. Unless you mean "Sydney is".. (which I'm sure you don't)
ladyjanewriter
10-07-2008, 06:25 PM
I really love the logo! I love how it fits the mood, but it still read-able.

I wonder if something like a cobweb would add the nightmare-ish quality?
MissSorianna
10-07-2008, 07:40 PM
I really like it , It looks like place I'd want to check. Very inviting. Good JOB!
TomSawyer
10-08-2008, 01:56 PM
i LOVE the daisies and the little swirly trail of dots..

i think you need something "nightmarish" in there though as that is in the name and there is no image for that aspect.. although I guess the blood splatter thing by the y of fantasy is kinda nightmarish..

over all though, i really like it!

oh, also, I think "Sydney's" is suppose to be "Sydneys' " with the apostrophe at the end of the name. Unless you mean "Sydney is".. (which I'm sure you don't)

Acutally, '"Sydney's" is correct. It shows ownership.

"Where one or more objects are owned by a subject, that subject usually takes an apostrophe followed by an s."

Jane’s dog is a golden retriever.